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https://youtu.be/x4rv0KfqPG0 After going through the peer review, I made a few changes to the film opener. In the beginning, I added a clip of people walking so that the town could feel inhabited instead of only showing sceneries. I added a clip of chaos happening, firefighter shot, and people running around frantically in the second part of the opener, which made the message clearer and was also suggested by many. In addition, I took out the fake blood in the sink because everyone said it made the video confusing and happened out of no where. I shorten some of the clips that was dragging out so it could be more precise and not get boring. Lastly, I changed the title to "The Rose bloom" because I felt that the former one was a little long. 

  Film #5 Peer Reviews What specific elements of the film opening did you like? Was there anything that left you confused? (be specific) What suggestions do you have for changes? I like the opening scenery. I am not sure what the movie is about other than the flower burning. Some more acting in the next video so I can understand the plot more. I really liked the establishing shots of nature and the close-up shots used throughout the film No nothing left me confused I recommend that you add more title cards in the film or shorten the establishing shots to make it go faster I loved the music in this film opening -- I thought it built great suspense and fit very nicely with the cool and creative concept. Good job! Some shots were a little confusing (first blood dripping in the sink and the knife). Also there were a lot of the same shots that went on for a l